Dope track bro, but i feel like that bass coulda hit a little harder but thats just my opinion. i like how you keep certain elements somewhat changing Keep up the good work bro just work on your bass Eq and maybe even the snare at points could be louder. Maybe add another sound or so especially on the second verse, or cut it up differently on the second verse.
Not really my type of music, like the voices in the background, but some of the synths sound a little to stock in my opinion, maybe some EQ or something like that would change it. Not exciting enough for me, but would probably sound very different with a rapper on the track.
That sound at the beginning is nice. I like the voices in the background too & this track isn't bad at all. I do agree that the synths wouldn't sound as stock with someone rapping over it. But overall, not bad work.
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