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appreciate the feed guys! Yeah i was trying to match my flow with the drum...i know the time signature is a bit off -+on it..it was tuff to ryme on the beat
 
dude dont come on here and act dumb...btw i listened to your shit and all i got to say is can u be any more of a cornball...typical trash beat with one of the worst lyrics i ever heard
 
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Returning feed as promised......

I can't pretend to be a qualified judge of this genre but I must say the MC's delivery is impressive with that chill kinda half-singing. Can't help but think this style suits slightly more 'conscious' rhymes though, as the twisted humour could make a point with some clout. Structuraaly the rhythmic emphasis is really effective and overall sounds really pro.

The guitar is particularly cool and the production overall is very, very tidy. I must agree with above comments about the snare though - could do with sounding a little more organic or being re-tuned every other bar.
 
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