I like this man. Composition wise it's on point. What needs work is your sound selection, and mixing. The drums, especially your bass is muddy, they kinda drown out your melodies. Your drum patterns are good though, real interesting. They keep things flowing nicely. This is just personal preference, and you might not even be fully done with the track, but I think you should make it longer. Add another verse, and maybe a bridge. I like it man, just work on the mixing, and sound selection and your good. Keep it up! Here's my newest track. It's my first attempt at an EDM beat! Let me know what you think, I would really appreciate it!! Thank you!! https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/electronic-dance-beat-f4f-100%25-conspicuous-vitality-448942/#post49656559
Awesome yea just email me your track while you're working on it, and I can give you some feedback on it, and help you out! Just email me: pestratorproductions@gmail.com