New beats...i think they sound dope. What about you?

That second one is straight fire! I followed you on SoundCloud, check me out! I also started a thread on here, as well.
 
First one: The synth is very grating on the ear, eq that shit. Could be great. The snare is nice but two elements for a beat? Add more. The vocal sample works sometimes but feels like it goes off beat in some places. The hats and bass came in, very weak. Turn them up and work on the sounds. Potential!

Second: The main melody in it is dope but work on the snare. You're using the same one. Maybe turn up the hats too. Cool idea but the keys are a bit cheesy. This is getting there though, that lead is great.

Third: The chops don't really work well, some of it sounds out of key and it's the same damn drums.

Keep working on your craft, all of these show potential.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...star-viceroy-remix-prod-cratehead-f4f-463097/
 
plotwist90 said:
First one: The synth is very grating on the ear, eq that shit. Could be great. The snare is nice but two elements for a beat? Add more. The vocal sample works sometimes but feels like it goes off beat in some places. The hats and bass came in, very weak. Turn them up and work on the sounds. Potential!

Second: The main melody in it is dope but work on the snare. You're using the same one. Maybe turn up the hats too. Cool idea but the keys are a bit cheesy. This is getting there though, that lead is great.

Third: The chops don't really work well, some of it sounds out of key and it's the same damn drums.

Keep working on your craft, all of these show potential.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...star-viceroy-remix-prod-cratehead-f4f-463097/
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this was probably the best thing I've read for a while. thank you.
 
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