Hey 3nterprise.
Just left a few comments on soundcloud. I really like the feel of the entire song, and I think you have some pretty original stuff going on in there, like the harp(?) melody, and the modulated synths. Because it sounds a little pop-ish, I'm guessing you were going for that style. If that's the case, I would try making the chord progressions a little more powerful, maybe by changing the instruments used (it sounds a little empty, like 'open', and I don't mean this in a bad way - maybe this was your intention).
Much potential. Keep it up
