My first public track, tell me what's up [Constructive criticism is welcome]

[deathprint]

Hello, my dear friends, this is the first track I made which is available for public access and is like my 3d track in general. I have a lot work ahead, will be happy to receive some tips on what should I do to improve.

 

[Teksaur]

Wait, this is your third track in general for ever making music?!?! If that's true you either spent at least a year or two learning your software before releasing a track, or your just that musically talented. I liked it, even though that type of music isn't my style, but I still liked it Good job. I know you didn't do the vocals though right?

 

[deathprint]

ooh, wow, thanks a lot I don't think I'm musically talented at all, but I've spent me like 3-4 months figuring out the software before I got the courage to post something for everyone to see. I'm glad u liked it, it is really pleasantly
Means I am not a lost soul in this world of music, thanks again ^^

 

[vato22]

u know for your first track its pretty damn good..very well composed nice instruments nice mix....I love the sample you used..u def got some talent...check me out [h=3]They Wanna Get U (Addictions) FEED 4 M'fN FEED Like Always[/h]

 

[deathprint]

Thanks, appreciate it, would like more feedback, maybe some tips on what I should improve. Thanks in advance