lil' verse

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ok i admit im not that good on this but here's ma first verse ok, please tell me wat ya fink.

Don't hate me just cause i'm not too nice, I got a heart so cold it's turning to ice//
Before starting a war against me you better think twice, cause i can roll my lyrics just like a dice//
Don't hate me just cause I'm a gurl//
and i prefer my bling rather than any pearl//
Don't hate me and call me a hoe//
Saying I'm wack and I've got no flow
cause like a bomb my anger will easily blow//
Don't hate me and think i'm insane//
I ain't the one to blame, if I leave u feelin in shame, cause compared to me your lyrix are lame//
but whatever you do Don't forget my name...//
 
calm down pain, try not to go off too much on this one.
 
jus tell me man, how do u know i'd find out?? u not like my lyrics or sumitt?
 
yea.......sorry to say but you ****in suck.........stop talkin about ice and dont say fink say think
 
b_gal read some of the other posts and you'll know who pain is. he is a very truthful man although the truth sometimes hurts a.k.a im guessing the name pain. anyhow this forum isnt a live battle so sit down and spend some time writting your lyrics so that they really shine, dont just "flow" in a few mins and come up with something. check out the tourny thats going on now for some really really good lines. keep droppin
 
well atleast ur honest, but i didn't mention ice that much :rolleyes:

TurkishSmoker said:
yea.......sorry to say but you ****in suck.........stop talkin about ice and dont say fink say think
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ok, thanx bigslim


bigslim said:
b_gal read some of the other posts and you'll know who pain is. he is a very truthful man although the truth sometimes hurts a.k.a im guessing the name pain. anyhow this forum isnt a live battle so sit down and spend some time writting your lyrics so that they really shine, dont just "flow" in a few mins and come up with something. check out the tourny thats going on now for some really really good lines. keep droppin
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Well at least you have good flow...now work on your content...
 
Damn. Reading this makes me want to apologize to Perfection. lol
 
*Blazin_Gal* said:
Don't hate me and call me a hoe//
Saying I'm wack and I've got no flow
cause like a bomb my anger will easily blow//
Don't hate me and think i'm insane//
I ain't the one to blame, if I leave u feelin in shame, cause compared to me your lyrix are lame//
but whatever you do Don't forget my name...//
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Rhyming girl and pearl, huh? Look, you're bad. You know it. Why front with a false battle ego? You're not only a terrible mc but you're also a female. Unfortunately, the latter is quite a chip on your shoulder. So you should either give up now or prepare yourself. I suggest giving up to be "truthful" about the whole situation.
 
Roll your eyes all you want. You asked for criticism. You wanna be lied to? If you do, stick to bull**** bathroom cyphers at high school dances and pep-rallies. Your style is garbage. In fact, it's some of the worse I've seen on this forum or in real life. Scooter girl on American Idol could write a better battle rhyme than you and she's loopy as ****. So yeah, keep on rolling your damn eyes "bL4Z1n' g(_)rL". It aint gonna push any talent towards your brain.
 
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