Just finished my first track!! Feedback?

[SimenArn]

Here is the videolink: youtube.com/watch?v=ori64YeZAgY

Hi! I am a sixteen year old producer from Norway. I started with FL Studio about a year ago, but have never completed a track. I have just made some basslines and drops! Any feedback will be well appreciated, positive or negative!

 

[DarthVado]

Your intro is really good man and the build-up and drop definitely is something you could dance to at a club. Before the first buildup it was kinda plain so what you might wanna do is put the vocals before the first buildup at like 0:53 and see how that works. Really good track tho keep it coming!

Check out my track:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-darthvado-feedback-much-appreciated-463734/