I think you should add some more drums (they should be more densely) because now it sounds more like an intro to the main part of the track. But of course it's only my opinion.
Intro is very cool but it just keeps on going with the drums etc. and sounds repetitive. But if this is where you are going for then there is no problem with it, original for sure! I personally think the higher ambiance notes are to bright, they can be brought down a bit but they sound nice too though. The small risers are very nice and original but they don't sound apart from the music, just like a lead. I think that the lead could jump out more.
Not my kinda thing, but there's some interesting sounds going down, nice beat. That rising synth sound has some high frequencies to dip, you're tickling my ears