I'd love advice on how my lyrics were in this song

[tuneitdown]

Hey guys let me know if you like the lyricism in this song I made, help me out

https://soundcloud.com/kraemo/burglar

Peace!

 

[RussD3x]

It flows really nicely. However the bass at the beginning of the track could be reduced a bit XD
But thats my personal preference, other than that it's awesome!

 

[tuneitdown]

Dope thank you man, I reuploaded the track with better sound quality: https://soundcloud.com/kraemo/kraemo-burglar