That was hot man! The only thing that took away from it for me was the hat. It was a dope pattern, but a little too loud I think. Also, maybe try layering a thicker, fatter snare behind the one that you already have. Other than that I think it was great! It would be really cool if you had a guitarist or something solo over the top too. Good shit though!
On another note, I just put out a song last night called Silent at the Wedding, I'd love some feedback if you have a minute. Thanks! soundcloud.com/ithinkimclarke/silent-at-the-wedding