Not bad but I was really waiting to see where you were going, and like you said on my track "you're all over the place". Was hoping the track would progress, get into something good, never really did. Second track maybe a 6/10?
Thanks for the feedback, remember there's a VERY thin line between arrogance and overcockiness.
Edit: not to sound rude or anything, just trying to give constructive feedback. I did enjoy your tracks, keep it up.
mix is on point again for both tracks man you really do it well. the first beat was ok wasn't really feeling it cause i dont listen to that type of music but production wise its real good. the second track was catchy man. the melody and the sounds you used were real great. good job overall man keep it up
Both tracks were really nice. I prefer the second one. The simplistic melody that turned more complex at parts was cool plus with the nice drum patterns, it was enjoyable. Keep it up.
your ideas are in the right direction but the mix isn't .. make it more bassy and less hi if you know what i mean.. on the first track that synth that came in on my right ear kind of hurt me because the eq'ing (and also the panning).. your melodies and sounds are right but the mix isn;t that's all peace!
you got some good things going on...but the mixes do need work...the vol levels seem a bit too loud....also on the second one it would be cool if you added some reverb on the snare...just work on eqing get your leveling down...and let the tracks breath...you got good examples here..i can see your potential