What do you mean by better?
My bad if my reply was too vague. I'm just trying to understand what you mean by "better". Is there a sound you have in mind? Who would you say has a good rap voice? Maybe we can start there.
To be honest with you, I think your voice is great. I wouldn't try to change it. It makes you, you, and helps to distinguish your personality from others. Have you considered trying to work on your rhyme structure. Your content is good imo.
No doubt! It sounds like you have a story to tell. What is your definition of flow? Again, I'm just trying to establish a common understanding of how you define flow vs. how I define flow, then we can continue to build from there. Remember, I'm learning too, I need to work on my flow as well. Flow to me is the connection between point A to point B. In other words, the movement between sounds or words. I don't know if that makes sense to you, maybe you can help me verbalize it better but its more or less the relationship between two sounds.
Ok kool. You mention the phrases "The way I rhyme" and "How you say the actual rap". How and Why in this case are styles of flow in my opinion. Your style of rapping could be your natural gift of expression and to me that's based on what your passionate about. People have told me that I mainly use one style of flow and that it gets predictable and redundant. I'm still trying to find which style or styles suit me best. I guess this has a lot to do with my personality traits. Styles and flows could be a reflection of self. Please feel free to add to what I'm saying.