crimsonhawk47
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Definitely not the first time this has been asked, but I need help giving this song more entertainment. Halfway through making it, I was very impressed by Timberlakes "Only when I walk away" Justin Timberlake - Only When I Walk Away (The 20/20 Experience 2of2) [Official Audio] - YouTube
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The beat was made with Maschine and mixed in logic. I know the mix isn't that great cause I did it on headphones, but I'm more concerned with the composition.
The first 4 bars are the intro, next 4 bars are an example of where a verse would be, and the last 4 bars would be the chorus.
SO I tried a standard intro without percussion, then brought percussion in for the verse and took out an instrument to make it less pronounced than the chorus. Then I brought everything in on the chorus. It's still missing something.
View attachment Output 1-2.mp3
The beat was made with Maschine and mixed in logic. I know the mix isn't that great cause I did it on headphones, but I'm more concerned with the composition.
The first 4 bars are the intro, next 4 bars are an example of where a verse would be, and the last 4 bars would be the chorus.
SO I tried a standard intro without percussion, then brought percussion in for the verse and took out an instrument to make it less pronounced than the chorus. Then I brought everything in on the chorus. It's still missing something.