[[[HIPHOP]]] Smooth Tune we Laid Down! Looking for Some Feedback! F4F!

Sick track, very smooth. Your transitions feel really natural. I've noticed there are longer periods in this track where the drums stay constant, and might benefit from some subtle changups to help the piece evolve a little more naturally. While I was listening to this track I wanted to hear some more consistent hi-hats come in at :40 or :59, it would make the dropout at 1:12 feel a little bigger. Dope track! I've got to post more before I can drop my track so I'll come back and edit this with a link to my shit later.
 
Liking the jam. Only crit with vocs is maybe switching up the rhyme sceme here and there.. starts to feel a bit repetitive. I dig when the HH's come in hard thats dope. And the vocal sample or singing at the end is really nice with the jam! Great vocal mixing overall! keep it up! Ill be back with a link for you
 
Sick track, very smooth. Your transitions feel really natural. I've noticed there are longer periods in this track where the drums stay constant, and might benefit from some subtle changups to help the piece evolve a little more naturally. While I was listening to this track I wanted to hear some more consistent hi-hats come in at :40 or :59, it would make the dropout at 1:12 feel a little bigger. Dope track!

Ummm, sorry for the double post, I'm not sure what happened.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-atmospheric-hip-hop-f4f-469527/#post49757844
 
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NinjaBeats said:
vocals are nicely mixed. Production is on point. Low mid and high all seem to be even balanced. Like that little sax going. Feel like that high octave (flute)? near the end stands out a little too much, maybe mess with the volume or the EQ to bring it down a little. But overall my 2 cents leave it where its at its still banging.

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The beat sounds like some old Kanye instrumentals. Your vocals need more to them, they need layers.

The instrumental is fresh, vocals just need some work.
 
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C O ) ) R V U S said:
Sick track, very smooth. Your transitions feel really natural. I've noticed there are longer periods in this track where the drums stay constant, and might benefit from some subtle changups to help the piece evolve a little more naturally. While I was listening to this track I wanted to hear some more consistent hi-hats come in at :40 or :59, it would make the dropout at 1:12 feel a little bigger. Dope track!

Ummm, sorry for the double post, I'm not sure what happened.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-atmospheric-hip-hop-f4f-469527/#post49757844
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This is great man! Im loving the drums, they almost sounds like they were live recorded for the track it self. The vocal that comes in at 1:29 is golden.

Kinda an XXYYXXish feeling from it, minus the Dub Sub! Will listen again!
 
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