Help a newbie out ? :D

[jmaverick]

https://soundcloud.com/reivaj-2/swizz

Please give me some advice. I want to improve. And dont be rude lol

 

[kdanger]

For a newb this is nice, i feel like when it switches to minor it feels a bit off. The piano scale becomes a bit tedious and flat but this will all get better with time my friend. You have some cool stuff in here to like those swells. Stay on your grind young padowan learner. Check me out and leave some feed!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ato-beats-{about-luigi-}-f4f-always-475355/2/