GRADE MY SONG

[maraa]

whats up everyone, Im a beginner song writer. Im trying to find my place? if that makes sense. Im writing a song and I just want to see if this particular part for my intro is good

I know what you be doing on the weekends
I see you on the corner talking to them loose ends
Thinking no body would find out nigga you good at pretend

 

[Suber]

this might be a poem, not a song. Get yourself an instrumental and a mic and record a reference track.