Good work with this remix - sounds appropriate for the style. I would focus the mix around the kick and snare/clap. I think they could be made more dramatic and more the focus of the track. The pad sound might be able to come down a bit in lieu of another lead synth type thing. But overall you've done a great job!
Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it! Do you have any tips on how I could get my drums more dramatic (still learning a lot about mixing) thanks again..I left some feedback on your track.