[FIRST POST] Producer needing SERIOUS feedback for *Hip-Hop/Rap* BANGERS [F4F]

[Taking D Throne]

Hey FP Fam! I'm a producer from Houston, TX , I started getting serious about producing a couple months back and fell in love with it. This is my first post on here, to get some serious constructive feedback (telling me what to
improve, whether or not my mix is decent, if my kicks aren't knocking hard enough, and also my beat arrangement) about some of my tracks and remember NEGATIVE CRITICISM IS BETTER THAN NO CRITICISM AT ALL. Have a
great weekend and of course leave any links and i'll give my own feedback !

http://soundcloud.com/takingdthroneproductions/banger-juicy-j-trap-type-beat

http://soundcloud.com/takingdthroneproductions/money-calling

http://soundcloud.com/takingdthroneproductions/joey-bada-old-school-type-hip

 

[Donta Black]

I can hear the Juicy J influence heavy in hear, keep it up bro, and check me out also: the beat is nice but with mos defs vocals on it, it sounds terrible if you can't tell its off beat. Check me out: Also I can hear the church influence in them keys, keep it up!

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...s-100%-feedback-returned-448241/#post49653341