First ever song! Would love to know what you think! :)

[miss_cupcake]

Hey guys,

I'm an 18 year old singer/songwriter. Would love to know your thoughts on this, this was the first song I have ever written. It may not be perfect but I think it's not bad for a first try. You can listen to it here -

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...songID=8791220

Any feedback/comments are greatly appreciated. Thanks!

 

[ARES.ona]

Hey,

The songs not my style but youve got a real good voice and thats some professional singing definiteley. One thing though: It kinda sounds too typical, theres nothing that makes it very original, I mean, try to do something that makes me remember the song for more than just the good singing, maybe something a little off beat, you know what I mean.

Check out my new snippet:

divshare.com/download/10545317-4e4

myspace.com/aresonabeats

 

[dmac1122]

oh snap another lil taylor swift lol jk. yea it aint bad for ur first song, aint bad at all. umm that guitar that comes in at 1:02 cld be a tab bit louder cuz it seems faded to the background. and that solo weird guitar/sitar sound cld be mixed better as well. but overall for ur first song go0d job.

check me out at https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=324466