I think it's pretty good man!
While listening to it I could see some kind of video about a great life (I might be crazy though haha)
You should turn down some hats and other sounds so that not everything sounds so "upfront".
Good job. Keep at it!
I think this could benefit from a good mix....I have to agree about the hi hats being to loud. horns are ok....just work on mix..check me out LOveS BeinG {Addictions Part.2} F4F LIKE ALWAYS