Da R Star - Journey (Wedding Song) - Feedback appreciated

[DRS]

What's up people! Although my registration date says 2003, I'd say that I'm new here because I hadn't been on here in a longtime.

This is a song I wrote and produced for one of my best friend's wedding. It's about the mixed emotions, ranging from fear, doubt and ultimately joy, of a young couple approaching their Wedding Day. I made the beat too. Lyrics are on the youtube link.



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[ballin102]

the lyrics are nice, and the mix is very good. id add more sounds to the instrumental maybe like a pad.

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[IVMIMVM]

good shit man the subtleties in the instrumental really enhance the atmosphere. its clear that you let out your emotions through the track real nice job on the delivery and storytelling. nothing negative to say.

 

[donny7337]

Nice i really like the melody and drums are solid

 

[omenomn]

very good percussion sound, simple beat, not my climate, too sweet, i lika hard rap, psychodelic and gangsta, but your no bad.

 

[omenomn]

very nice beat, i see good imagine i you, beacause beat is unique

 

[omenomn]

ballin102 when I here your beats i was crazy, you have big talent, respect

 

[talar85]

Good

 

[neiaalthea]

I love the beat, love the voice, I feel all the emotions. (what you told me i need to work on lol) Thanks for sharing the song and inspiring me to let these emotions out!