A chill melodic track that needs feedback:)

[niceCream]

Hello, I've recently posted my track on youtube, and I need a little feedback from you guys. I'm still (and always) improving and developing. What I've really experienced is that I think it sounds better on some devices than others. What do you think about it? Looking for constructive feedback. I will also feedback your track if you got ant. Thanks a lot

Link for track is here:

 

[pjw98]

Hi,

Just to let you know that I'm new to producing music so my feedback may not have credit from a producer's point of view however from a listener's point of view, I can give you my first impressions

I really like this track, it has a good catchy melody and it proper gives me chilled vibes, the atmosphere is fantastic, honestly overall good track mate keep up the good work.

 

[maxdonaldson]

so beautiful. love the natural sounds, the piano and the delay on it. thoughtful mixing. think the main synth melody in the last section could have more variation. the ending feels a bit underwhelming, and like the parts of mix aren't in sync, not metrically or anything, but in their intention and meaning.