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Whilst i was browsing the forum and beggining to take the general advice to heart, i also composed three pieces:
1 - Vladimir's story (inspired by Shamaran by Sevdaliza, eventually changed reason to narrate a story i wrote; the disssonance is on purpose)
2 - Isol (also inspired by Sevdaliza to some extent, tries not to be robotic and part-based but still fails)
3 - Lone (an attempt to be as sad as possible, the emptiness is by design to keep an isolating feel and allow the instruments to do what ChatGPT calls "breathe")
I've also made three other mostly nice pieces that i made a few months ago, but represent the extent of my skill and normal music:
1 - Santander-Barcelona (inspired by a similar car journey, designed to overwhelm and feel foreign)
2 - Sounds of the Night (flavoured using actual samples from the night, designed to express three stages in sleeping using the video)
3 - No love (Supposed to have lyrics, didn't, but i like the transition from the tense beggining to the chorus)
I would like to ask for whichever feedback from here is most applicable to each of the pieces, as well as what you can give from your own head and experience.
For reference, all of my published music is available at my website, where the four pieces at the top are the newest, the test-series is the oldest, and the rest are somewhere in-between (note how little i've changed; This is due to me not seeking feedback).
1 - Vladimir's story (inspired by Shamaran by Sevdaliza, eventually changed reason to narrate a story i wrote; the disssonance is on purpose)
2 - Isol (also inspired by Sevdaliza to some extent, tries not to be robotic and part-based but still fails)
3 - Lone (an attempt to be as sad as possible, the emptiness is by design to keep an isolating feel and allow the instruments to do what ChatGPT calls "breathe")
I've also made three other mostly nice pieces that i made a few months ago, but represent the extent of my skill and normal music:
1 - Santander-Barcelona (inspired by a similar car journey, designed to overwhelm and feel foreign)
2 - Sounds of the Night (flavoured using actual samples from the night, designed to express three stages in sleeping using the video)
3 - No love (Supposed to have lyrics, didn't, but i like the transition from the tense beggining to the chorus)
I would like to ask for whichever feedback from here is most applicable to each of the pieces, as well as what you can give from your own head and experience.
For reference, all of my published music is available at my website, where the four pieces at the top are the newest, the test-series is the oldest, and the rest are somewhere in-between (note how little i've changed; This is due to me not seeking feedback).
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