Well f*ck you too

[_SG_]

I flip out often, visions of skeleton's jumping out of coffins
Be cautioned, I will ignore you while you're talkin'
Cause to me you're all just walking talkin dick riders
Who suck on the spliff like a dick to get higher

I'm f*ckin' insane, do you get it or not?
Maybe you finally will when I'm smirkin' and diggin' your plot
All I hear b!tches screamin' from gettin' raped by demon minons
Reverse horror slideshow in my head starring richard simons

Don't touch me b!tch! I'll cut off your hands
Then sow your mouth shut and mail your limbs first class to france
I thought I told you I target the weak
Beat ya to death wit your own sneaks and piss on your corpse

I'm pissed off, piss poor and obsessed wit gore
Crazed madman cravin' blood, I want more and more
Got a collection of dead bodies on my basement floor
Ruthless and raw wit the saw, never caught by the law!

 

[Point God]

That was nice, wordplay was awesome, props

 

[_SG_]

Thanks for the feedback, which now seems pretty rare in this section.

 

[Bravery Pandemic]

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[_SG_]

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Interesting choice of words for feedback

 

[jmk9992]

Damn bruh whut u mad for lol? The wordplay wuz sick tho good verse..

 

[Gutty502]

not bad sg, but you lost steam towards the end, i could tell, maybe just cuz i know your style by now, seems you feel in the same delema i do, like thye first 6-8 lines come out mad fast, real natural and smooth, then something distracts you and its gone, then your fighting just to get it finished, but deff word play on this is still dope, but is my theory correct?

 

[_SG_]

not bad sg, but you lost steam towards the end, i could tell, maybe just cuz i know your style by now, seems you feel in the same delema i do, like thye first 6-8 lines come out mad fast, real natural and smooth, then something distracts you and its gone, then your fighting just to get it finished, but deff word play on this is still dope, but is my theory correct?

yeah I usually slow down during the last four, but it's not such a big deal anymore since I'm just writing these things for fun. thanks for the feedback gutty and you too jmk.

 

[Berti8501]

I thought I told you I target the weak
Beat ya to death wit your own sneaks and piss on your corpse

Nice 2 bars man... Wordplay definitely on point

 

[Young Caprice]

That waz really dope, nice work, keep it up

 

[_SG_]

That waz really dope, nice work, keep it up

Thanks for the feedback