Rate These 3 Verses Please!

[troythemac]

Hey, here a new track that me and some homies made, I made the beat and rapped the third verse. Hoping to get some objective feed on my flowing, I usually only try to get feed on my beats, but i'd like to hear how people think my rapping can improve. And anything you guys think about the other 2 verses, chorus, or beat would be tight too
http://soundcloud.com/tmack/see-me-emoney-emmo-and-t-mack

 

[Ya_Zayn]

hey i like this! good job on the beat man. Chorus is really good. As far as the flow/delivery/rhymes.... sounds like you know what you are doing lol. The only criticism I really had (and this is nitpicking) is that maybe the flow slows a little too much towards the middle/end? I also noticed there isn't a bridge or any point where the beat switches up. Personally I try to switch it up for a few bars, but I guess it depends on genre/style w/e. Sick track Troy!
(Also, solid mix)

 

[ol' sparky]

liking the intro and flow the most

 

[zarrillobeats]

everything is great except the hook. i think the vocals sound a bit more weak. stack like 2 more layers of vocals and i think it would be perfect. where r u from?

 

[troythemac]

thanks homies always appreciate the feed. i'm from sonoma california

 

[manchester8]

the hook have no feeling in it, the hook need to be sing like you feel it you know