Just wrote these and i'm trying to gage with how my writing is translating with other people, any feedback is appreciated!
I’m suppose to be bitter and I know it,
Delivering true words of sorrow as a poet,
But hey, There’s no tears of rage,
It’s just a phase, simply a turning of a page,
Because to put it honestly,
She came to you straight through me,
You got something out of her I couldn’t even see,
becoming everything I always tried to be,
I’m suppose to be bitter and I should be,
But how can I be bitter when you let us both free
I’m suppose to be bitter and I know it,
Delivering true words of sorrow as a poet,
But hey, There’s no tears of rage,
It’s just a phase, simply a turning of a page,
Because to put it honestly,
She came to you straight through me,
You got something out of her I couldn’t even see,
becoming everything I always tried to be,
I’m suppose to be bitter and I should be,
But how can I be bitter when you let us both free
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