a few raps i wrote

alxgry

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These are "raps" i wrote for fun when i was bored or whatever. Some are done some arent just throwing em up for fun ive never showed ANYBODY these before.

sometimes when im stressin
i just really wanna give up
cant see to count my blessings
callin god but no one picks up
snappin on my parents,
for no apparent reason
only smoke the herb
but they probably think im fiendin
im just that crazy kid that no one wants to see,
they said that im the example of what nobody wants to be
sittin in my house cold so we dont waste the heat,
thank god i got a father if not id be on the street
and a lotta people got it worse then me,
but dealing with foreclosure my god it hurts to be,
the house where i grew up empty my god it hurts to see
something some can't understand thats why i spit this verse for free
i aint trippin i dont need nobodys pity,
since the time i did 10 months nobody ridin with me

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everybody bitchin,
yeah i got problems too
and money is the only thing that can solve a few
aint got no real homies
get no love from b i t ch ez
in a perfect life id just smoke blunts and count my riches
but thats just not how things are goin so im grindin hard
got court in seven days dog i hope i beat the charge
mobbin thru oc im bumpin in my ghetto vic
gnarly white boy but im on that ghetto shit
mama lost the house, and thats why shes cryin
you know im cryin too, i just find a way to hide it
never let em see you sweat and thats just what ive learned
feel the stress fade away once the weed is burned
i just keep it real - and you can see that shit
cant wait for the day i say i never thought id be this rich
until then imma lay back and make some moves
throw the extras in the box that used to keep my shoes
imma keep on goin
na they cant take me down
they got the dogs sniffin
hope they dont make a sound
cause if they open up my trunk then im gunna fry
but f*xk this bein broke shit man id wrather die
sike man you know i keep my faith
at the bottom of my ounces man you know i smoke the shake
and im high every day, thats just how its gotta be
gotta get it any way cause in this world aint nothin free


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ok im ridin round in that vic,
police pull me over i ask why he aint say shit,
just told me to get out my whip
im thinking god damn i guess im goin down for this shit
cause my trunk yeah i got a quarter pound in that b1tsh
and its even worse he say he knows me
last time he searched quarter o-z,
plus some bags and a scale it was on me
they wanna know who my big homey
but you know the rules i dont ever snitch,
unsafe lane change aint that some shit,
didnt bring the dogs cause it wouldnt stick,
trooper middendorf, you a bish
Im just tryna get my paper,
young and white bumpin in that vic i see you muggin haaattaaaa
gotta catch ya lata,
got no time for a .8,
and no time for a 25
i serve you what you order,
aint gotta worry bout gettin mine.
Cause all the time bish im on my grind
12 times outta 10 money on my mind
a better plug im always tryna find,
but the price i get right now is fine
so im a keep on hustlin theres no way that you can stop it,
you feds are so dumb,
cause now i know your watchin




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the way im livin got me accustomed to stress,
all my teachers trippin sayin that im not doin my best
but ufck college i dont even wanna be here,
i swear to god dyin broke is my on-lee fear
look on my face like im about to break down
movin quarter pounds i aint got no time for breaks now
cause any time you slip, thats how they getcha
and when you doin time none ya friends can do it with ya
and thats some real shit
these other rappers rappin boy i really live this
everybody askin why i gotta move out,
wish that i could say its cause im movin to a new house
for you slow ones its foreclosure
tryna get serious? get back with you, when im more sober
so ill prolly never hit you back
keep one rolled and you know, that that itch is fat
if it aint a white owl then im rippin tubes
and if we talking competition dog then im rippin you
walk past me and youll probably catch a whiff a fruit,
and thats 100 proof like some motha****in absolut
every time i target a beat, it screams shoot!
a lotta people say im rude but im just aloof
we keep it movin in the east,
ship it in from cali then we move it on the street
my flow is so poetic keep it movin on the beat
i gotta find a better way to get my family on its feet
damn, im a motha****in beast,
unknown white kid and im comin with the heat

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the same situation is talked about in a few, but whatever. its all for fun. And also, you can believe it or not, but i am a FIIIRRMM believer in keeping it real. I didnt just write this shit for fun some of this shit brought tears to my eyes as i was writing it. call me what you want haha.

---------- Post added at 06:17 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:11 PM ----------

you have to know how i wanted to flow for a lot of these but you get the point
 
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I like it man, always speak from your heart and keep working at it. There is always room for improvement. I tried rhyming your shit out loud, it flowed nicely at times and not so much at other times. The right amount of syllables is key, per line before each rhyme, will help you catch a hot rhythm.
 
I like it man, always speak from your heart and keep working at it. There is always room for improvement. I tried rhyming your shit out loud, it flowed nicely at times and not so much at other times. The right amount of syllables is key, per line before each rhyme, will help you catch a hot rhythm.

Yeah i know what your saying. Sometimes its hard to find the right words. Some of them though there is breaks and pauses that really you just cant see from just the words. Plus some of them to were certain beats or whatever. Its all just for fun and just getting some shit out of my head. Thanks for the reply :cheers:
 
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I get a good snapshot of who you are as a person. I like this. Keep writing dude.
 
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