Feedback on my verse ???

[BEATZKMT]

Please listen to my verse and give me some feedback on what i can work on ? My friend made this beat but i am a producer as well, Im only 17 years old. Hit me with some criticism.. Thank You

 

[Enigma(EndofDaze)]

Straight up man I like it alot, I'd say maybe work on flowing to the beat just alittle more maybe??
Im digging it tho Fasho homie.
Great work

 

[ol' sparky]

i agree with enigma classic beat but flow was off a bit very good beat though for young guy

 

[BEATZKMT]

I was kinda trying to use pockets in the beatt if you know what i mean ?

 

[zarrillobeats]

ayo that dope as hell. how did you get that effect on your voice? like did u do adlibs with delay on them or what?

 

[BEATZKMT]

Thanks g.. i put delay on the main vocal as well as the adlibs.