akward exploration

alter.grounds

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i paint a picture of perfection, stab the canvas with the brush
and refuse to live a life that only spans from dawn to dusk
found jesus in the dust on the tailgate of a truck
i think i'll take the chance, pass up a dance with lady luck

got all that i could need between my wife and our seed
and plus i'm strictly carniverous, never concerned about the green
dream scape fade until the scene is an inverted white
while two stepping razors dance across your line of sight

right and left wing crippled, bring the buzzard to the ground
ricochet between the channels, place a dagger in the sound
mount this pale horse to stride across the rotten fruited plain
middle finger firmly rested on the trigger to the brain

stay poised on red crayolas, be the first to draw some blood
running down an american dream, dead in the mud
but the backspace is tired, hit delete button next
capital x, placing the stress atop of tape decks

(and he walked on down the hall)

with sesquipedalian oratories to shatter your categories
your ordinary stories honestly bore me
matador got the data pouring directly out the disk
while you sift through shifting sands searching for reasons to exist

i carve an explanation where the question often sits
saw you shadowing my footsteps but my dust was all you bit
hit the side streets to leave the mainstream traffic jam behind
on an akward exploration through the confines of the mind

hindsight is twenty twenty but i'm rocking twenty ten
absolute by definition, got no reason to pretend
bend the bars before the get the chance to rest upon the page
no expression on my face as i then take the center stage

curtains close, seats ignite, witness the crowd as they scream
sharp tongue across the language, every last letter bleeds
a cacophony of sound, the drums mingle with the shouts
feed the survivors to my music, let the rhythm sort them out

(and he walked on down the hall)
 
Only thing to say is that was ill. I'm loving the lyrics man, please tell me you're recording this stuff?
 
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i will be...my home setup if uber wack...i don't even have decent moniors to hear whether the beats sound decent...plus the beat i got for this track and teeth need to be redone...they're wack old fruity loops beats and i've been making much better stuff recently w/ reason3...i got a friend who's got a good studio setup, so all i need is time to redo the beats and actually swing by his house to record...
 
Alright, I've used reason 3 (upgraded to 4) for a while, if you ever need some help or advice feel free to ask. I hope you record soon, don't let that talent go to waste.
 
thanks man...i'm doing alright manuvering around reason...only issue i have is my sound sucks so i keep getting the levels wrong...once i get some decent speakers or a nice set of headphones i should be able to pump out better quality sounds...i got a few of my beats on my site http://www.altergrounds.com/
 
I'm liking your production too, it's a very different approach to what most are trying to do these days.
 
thanks...i'd like to say that's what i'm going for, but honestly i'm just a little different...like i've tried making regular beats and rhyming regular rhymes and couldn't do it...

i appreciate the props...i'll let you know when i get some stuff recorded as long as you do the same when you drop your **** on record...
 
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