Track - Young Heavyweights (F4F)

[DopeAtheist]

I believe I did the vocals a tad bit too loud, but I'd like feedback on the mixing and lyrics, I did the first verse and the hooks, my homie does the 2nd verse, any feedback is appreciated!

https://soundcloud.com/dopeatheist/infamouz-featuring-blitz-young

 

[NeimanTyler]

sounds good...flow is nice...like u said lower the vocs a bit...i like the sample...turn up the drums...make em slap...sounds clean though...keep grinding.

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[DopeAtheist]

thanks for the feedback!

 

[Oxygen88]

man this is cool I dig the flow, but im not sure about the beat skipping so much at the start? could change up sooner to keep the flow going a little better all round though nice beat, nice flow! keep at it guys!!! you've got something that works here! https://www.futureproducers.com/for...at-oxygen88-entrance-feed-feed-always-451817/ check out my latest when you can?

 

[WieczKid]

Flow Is cool. Def. Vocals Too Loud. I would put in drops and or switch it up a bit. I def. think you have something there though!!! Dedication+Motivation+Sacrifice=Sucess

 

[2s7]

Flow is really good (both of you). And of course vocals are too loud. And when you start rapping the sample is too monotonous (from 0.11 to 0.22), I think it should change a little bit earlier. But I'm gonna follow you definitely

check my beat (I'm still noob)
Trumpet beat

 

[mrslusar]

The vocals do seem to be a bit too loud, but overall I'd say it's a great song. The lyricism is really creative and the delivery is very passionate (even if it's a bit loud). Good job.

 

[DopeAtheist]

Thanks for the feedback yall, as soon as I get back to my comp ill check everything out and leave feedback, I followed those on soundcloud that liked or commented!

 

[purpribb]

Damn bro ur flow is colddd. I can def dig it. Just turn down the vocals a bit lol

keep it up

 

[DopeAtheist]

all feedback returned

 

[timetravtoaster]

Greetings.



This has a nice sound. I liker the track and the rapper, but as already stated, the vocals are towering all other levels. I'd like to hear this with the levels corrected. Good job overall.




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[DopeAtheist]

thanks for the feedback! feedback returned

 

[BaZix]

yeah, the vocals really are too loud, the instrumental is really good though.
Your flow is on point, it matches the beat, but as you said, the voice takes over too much space. Otherwise , keep it up, I'm impressed