(SOUTH BEAT) No Mercy - SLOOOOOW Trapish Beat - 56 BPM - F4F!!

pMbeats

pMbeats

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This track starts slow and doesn't peak until after the second verse so I'm interested to see if I kept your attention until then.

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Please leave honest, critical feedback. Be specific about what you like/don't like. Hurt my feelings :cry:

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this is really nice bruv! i think u put it well together. i would suggest if you modulate the strings a bit. to me they sound a bit too plain and simple, but other than that, great beat bruva!!! thumbs up!!
 
This sounds lame but the soundloud waveform displayed is varied enough to 'look' interesting! That theremin sound is impressive and could do with being more pronounced in the mix because of its relative scarcity in this type of beat. That's your lead right there in my opinion.

Beat progresses with some maturity, the 'horns' getting busier as it goes on. There is some good layering evident which lends a richness to proceedings.

As an old boy I know jack about this genre but production seems pretty crisp to me, but boost that theremin mate!

https://soundcloud.com/fnyk
 
NCORE BEATS said:
this is really nice bruv! i think u put it well together. i would suggest if you modulate the strings a bit. to me they sound a bit too plain and simple, but other than that, great beat bruva!!! thumbs up!!
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TK Drumz said:
Ncore is right , u need to layer more instruments to make them sound full
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Dammit, I pulled about half the reverb off the strings right before I rendered it and it does sound probably a little too thin now. Thanks for the heads up.

dylan_wtf said:
the progression of the beat held my attention but i do agree, the horns sound a little flat, maybe layer them with horns an octave lower or thicker horns. other than that the melodies are on point and the elements work well together, and there are enough change ups to keep it moving

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...trumental-album-all-feedback-returned-470048/
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Cheers bro, checking you out now.

FNYK said:
This sounds lame but the soundloud waveform displayed is varied enough to 'look' interesting! That theremin sound is impressive and could do with being more pronounced in the mix because of its relative scarcity in this type of beat. That's your lead right there in my opinion.

Beat progresses with some maturity, the 'horns' getting busier as it goes on. There is some good layering evident which lends a richness to proceedings.

As an old boy I know jack about this genre but production seems pretty crisp to me, but boost that theremin mate!

https://soundcloud.com/fnyk
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If it looks good, it IS GOOD! LOL I wanted that whistle to sit really low in the background but I'll see what it sounds like just a little louder. I only tested this on my own speakers so it could be coming in lower on your setup. I appreciated your feedback. Make a thread and link me and I'll be happy to return the favor.
 
hey man. i really like the intro of the song. the transition at 2:09 is real nice. but yeah i agree with the rest about the strings. it has a nice melody but it comes out but the other sounds seem to be overwhelming the strings. maybe its just my speakers lol. i liked the progression on the track as well man, its consistent throughout which makes the beat come out real smooth.

appreciate it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...low-emo-hip-hop-instrumental-beat-f4f-470224/
 
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