Seas and Trees, Pop/Hip-Hop Track- Will Return All Feedback, Thanks!

[nafix]

A demo track I finished a couple of months ago. It still needs some work, but please be critical and honest. I will return all feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/nafix_dhp/seas-and-trees-new

 

[Snowman3300]

This is really cool. there's a lot going on but I really enjoyed it. Don't really know how to critique it...it sounded great in my headphones too. good job

 

[obdrummer]

woah dude the synths and shit at the end was crazy haha. but yeah sounded dope

 

[jsubtle]

Gave it an honest listen, i have high expectations. I didn't like the intro. It starts to build up tho. Critique is whoever is rapping needs a better delivery.

 

[logwood]

Thanks for the feedback on our beat. I am listening to trees and seas. The beat is really cool.The changes were really interesting, and the hook is nice. My main criticism is with the verses and the rap artist. I don't really like how the rapper sounds... Rhymes and delivery seem to be okay, but I feel like the vocals need a better mix!!

 

[WordplayMetzger]

Theres A LOT going on in the beat but its cool.I really like the synths but the vocals need to be mixed better.Im gonna make sure to follow you on SC when I get a chance though!

check out my beat https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/lost-miami-feedback-feedback-always-373299/

 

[itsosman]

dope beat and song as a whole, but the vocals are kind of thin

 

[Ace Noise Beats]

Actually liked this one. Sounds different. Liked the talked box. Need to work on mixing the vocals though.

 

[nafix]

Thanks for the feedback guys. Yea the vocoder definitely needs some work. Currently I'm using Orange vocoder with sylenth as the input. Anyone have any suggestions on a better vocoder setup and maybe a sample? I'd be really interested in that.