Rolling In The Deep - Adele (WORK IN PROGRESS)

[circab]

FIRST UP - ANY FEEDBACK WILL BE RETURNED ASAP!

This is a tune I've wanted to remix for a long time.
That's probably one of the main reasons I wanted to get into producing.

Anyway's I've been doing this a couple of years, and its over the past 6 months I've got serious and actually tried to make an effort at producing something quality.So this track, take a listen cause this one is still pretty basic and fresh.

I'm just getting a groove together, and there is no real structure defined yet.

I'd love to hear some idea's, maybe find someone to add there touch to it.

http://www.soundcloud.com/circab/rolling-in-the-deep-circa-b

 

[FunkyC]

shit thats some smooth house you got there my frand.

the vocals are a bit off, but seriously ithink you should pull some deadmau5 shit vocal less because you got some skill.

 

[circab]

You honestly do not know how much that means to me

I've been so ermm... unconfident about my music production skill... it's only recently I've felt I'm at a level to share with people.
I'm working on getting the vocals to sit in the mix flush, a little sidechain seems to of helped a great deal.

Seriously FunkyC, thank you for that comment!

 

[MoneyBeats]

the vocals are a bit off. but other than that this is solid

 

[circab]

MoneyBeats you're a legend thank you.

You got any tips for getting the vocals to fit tighter in the overall mix ?

 

[Eff V]

I think the vocals just aren't in sync, just slide it forward or change the tempo. Also i think that there could be a bit more progression in the song, other than that I like it.

 

[Siloh]

aye man yea the vocals are a bit off you can probably speed up the tempo of the vocal or slow it down to fit it thats what i usually do lol and yea it sounds good

 

[circab]

More progression and the vocals need some serious treatment!

Right, I'm on it. I'd love to get this track completely finished and cleaned up.
It's about time I delivered a complete piece, the whole package lol

 

[mr brown]

Get the vocals straightened out, and I would play this in the club for sure.

 

[ProducerJC]

Not bad, it needs work; however, I believe it's only a matter of practice. I like the deep dance vibe, so keep up the good work.
[URL="http://producerjc.com/"]Feel free to check out my remixes.
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[circab]

Seriously Mr Brown ?
Do you DJ ?


Thanks for all of the positive feedback guys!

 

[Headnod]

Not my kind of sound, but this is definently something you could dance to

The vocals worked out well, but I'd mabye like a little more exciting climax of the beat

Return the feedback https://www.futureproducers.com/for...strumental-nas-type-feedback-returned-397124/

 

[beats4him]

I think the idea is dope, but it really needs some work. The vocals are off and the beat itself need a bit more energy and variation. Keep grinding!

If you have time check out my thread: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...b-free-instrumental-album-fb-returned-396404/

 

[circab]

Already did beats4him.

Headnod complex
Loved the track

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Again thanks everyone whose contributed ideas, opinions and critique. It really goes a long way.
I've got an updated version of the track now.

Will keep you posted!

 

[Gameshifter]

Ok From Start....nice delay on the vocals...building....yep....had it had it had it....Ohhhh Nice drop into the beat, this is feeling really clean thus far...ok snare comes in....interesting choice....maybe let sit a little further back....OK here the problem, tempo not synced....altho it kinda works....recommend for the second half some new sounds sooner to accentuate its epicness(needed at that point)....overall good work..

 

[Dallas_audio]

Vocals are off beat and you could also cut a bit from the mid-highs ' in the vocals/mix.