Original Song (Feed for Feed) What do you guys think?

Love the pitch shifting and fx on the vocals. The ambience on the track is amazing. I think you could find a bassier kick, but other than that it's very nice track! Good shit!
 
super chill like allways. I like the drum and perc work. I love it when the snare comes in but if u could just give it a little more punch it would be perfection i think. Lyrics where dope aswell.
Good job, peace!
 
Wasup man, just returning the love, pretty cool track, beat was cool, vocals and rhymes were cool too, only thing I would add is to add more reverb to your vocals to match the ambiance of the beat, cuz the beat had that dreamy feel so I would add that same feel to your vocals, but that's just me, keep em comin, stay righteous
 
love the beginning kinda puts you in a very sedated trance ..... pretty cool pitch shifting...i agree that the kick could use some more "kick"...but if that is what you want then its fine...overall a very good effort....i liiike
 
Firstly by reading that description and listening to the beat, you've got the proper vibe. Your kick needs a bit of 100hz or another punchy kick with enough top end to stand out in the mix and I would also add more reverb to the vocal just to suit the track more. Good job.

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Did a good job with capturing the vibe. I agree with the others that the kick needs more punch. I would also like to hear those rim shots a little more forward in the mix with a nice reverb. Maybe a snappier snare. I liked the extra percussion.

As for vocals, I liked the pitch shifting and felt the delivery was alright. I really felt like you are sacrificing flow and rhyme schemes for what you are trying to say though, which is never worth it in my opinion. Work on being a bit more lyrical and complex and I think you could probably be pretty nice.
 
Gaus said:
super chill like allways. I like the drum and perc work. I love it when the snare comes in but if u could just give it a little more punch it would be perfection i think. Lyrics where dope aswell.
Good job, peace!
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Vanguard Punch said:
Wasup man, just returning the love, pretty cool track, beat was cool, vocals and rhymes were cool too, only thing I would add is to add more reverb to your vocals to match the ambiance of the beat, cuz the beat had that dreamy feel so I would add that same feel to your vocals, but that's just me, keep em comin, stay righteous
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vato22 said:
love the beginning kinda puts you in a very sedated trance ..... pretty cool pitch shifting...i agree that the kick could use some more "kick"...but if that is what you want then its fine...overall a very good effort....i liiike
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24FITMAN said:
The instrumental fits the title for sure. Really has a reminiscing vibe. Great lyrics and concept too. The vocal alterations are tight too, kinda of like going in & out of thoughts. Great work fam, I can dig it, keep doing your thing.
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Thank you guys for the input! I really do appreciate it and take all points to consideration. I punched up the kick an mellowed out the vocals a bit.
 
I love that Donkey Kong sample haha, dope beat man! Love the drums. Sick bars too, you killed it!
 
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GSCO said:
I love that Donkey Kong sample haha, dope beat man! Love the drums. Sick bars too, you killed it!
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Hahaha that is awesome that you recognize the sample! That whole soundtrack kicks ass. Anyways, thanks for the listen and feedback. Peace!
 
tyty602 said:
good production , you flowed nicely over the drums , vocals need a better mix tho. Good job tho
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Jinxed said:
Dude! I dig this sh*t man, its real cool, kinda brings this bobby raps vibe with it, you only need a guy like spooky black and this track will be huge bro, i swear, nice track! Real cool mix aswell.

If you want you can check out my track aswell man, it would mean alot! : https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ft-casino-sasquatch-remix-***-f4f-***-480703/

Thanks!
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Thank you for the listen guys! I really appreciate all the feed.

Jinxed, I hit you back in your thread.

Peace.
 
I'm feelin this track bruh. It has a lot of emotion in it, the beat gives me nostalgia. The pitch shifts on the vocals are trippyy bruh. I like that intro too. The only thing that I would change would be to start the vocals when the beat drops at 0:29. But that's just me, other than its a great track bruh.
 
this is really tight. i love the pitch shifting and the whole vibe is really nice. to make the kick punchier, I would think about notching some EQ out of the low end elements of the track. my favorite trick these days is actually to use a multi band compressor and side chain just the kick frequencies out of the bass. helps things punch through the mix nicely. overall great work here man, love the style you have going
 
Aleksey said:
Bro this is sick as hell, I love it. Followed
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Jacimus said:
Sounds very ambient. I could see logic goin on this too. Good flow tho bro. Keep up the work.
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breezyfye said:
I'm feelin this track bruh. It has a lot of emotion in it, the beat gives me nostalgia. The pitch shifts on the vocals are trippyy bruh. I like that intro too. The only thing that I would change would be to start the vocals when the beat drops at 0:29. But that's just me, other than its a great track bruh.
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dewaldo said:
this is really tight. i love the pitch shifting and the whole vibe is really nice. to make the kick punchier, I would think about notching some EQ out of the low end elements of the track. my favorite trick these days is actually to use a multi band compressor and side chain just the kick frequencies out of the bass. helps things punch through the mix nicely. overall great work here man, love the style you have going
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Thank you guys for all the love. I appreciate you guys for taking time to listen and give feedback! Peace.
 
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