Need Feedback on jazz/hiphop tracks !(Giving feedback)

Damn dude I dig this a lot! Love the laid back groove. I feel like piano samples can get repetitive but you do a good job keeping a good amount of variety. Keep goin man!
 
beatsbyphelix said:
I released two new hip hop beats and I'd like to share it with all hip hop lovers.
Please listen to it and leave a comment with thoughts, i'll return all kinf of feedback!
thanks


https://soundcloud.com/beatsbyphelix/this-jazz-beat

https://soundcloud.com/beatsbyphelix/daddy
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I'm enjoying the jazzy piano. Perfect music for listening to late at night. Maybe the drums could be even more subtle, but that's my taste. In any case, it's your taste and ideas, so nice job.

*YOUR opinion matters. Drop a comment?* :)
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmusic/787-to-732
 
there both clean as ****, as soon as I listen,I clicked the follow button, sounds like some new age jazz, exactly how it should sound !

Got any advice for me !?
 
Crocydilus said:
Damn dude I dig this a lot! Love the laid back groove. I feel like piano samples can get repetitive but you do a good job keeping a good amount of variety. Keep goin man!
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Thank you so much bro, so appreciated
and i'll take it into account,thanks for the comment,
peace!
 
BeatbyAS said:
there both clean as ****, as soon as I listen,I clicked the follow button, sounds like some new age jazz, exactly how it should sound !

Got any advice for me !?
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Thank you mate!! this means a lot for me,ima check your tracks, check out soundcloud!
peace.
 
blackroyalty said:
I'm enjoying the jazzy piano. Perfect music for listening to late at night. Maybe the drums could be even more subtle, but that's my taste. In any case, it's your taste and ideas, so nice job.

*YOUR opinion matters. Drop a comment?* :)
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmusic/787-to-732
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Any comment or critique is welcome so thank you Michael, maybe I have to work my drums I'll take it into account!
I checked out your tracks, commented and followed you, you are good as fck.
 
Very clear drums mix bro. But you need a better hat sound for drums. A less reverb effect would be cool on it.

But unfortunately I didn't like the melody. I don't think you composed that melody, it is an old sample, I guess.
 
First track - very smooth. Really nice intro. Some of the nicest melodic play I've heard on any song posted on this forum. Mix is pretty tight aside from mid range clashes between the piano, but it kind of adds a nice vintage effect that works well.

Second - nice sample! And very nice drop into the beat. Track sounds drunk, the way it trudges forward with that sample weaving in and out - really cool effect. Would be interested to hear more from you in the future. Thanks for the feedback man.
 
That jazz track is def smooth and it reminds me of some Pete Rock. Really like the piano and that's def my type of track, but I'd like to hear some variation in the drums - maybe a fill or some change ups in the hi hats like some rides at different points.

Really like the bounce of the second track and I can tell jazzy tracks are def your comfort zone! Laid back grooves that'll give the emcee room to shine all over it with some hypnotic stories.
 
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