feedback on Video/track

[Lightskinboy]

hi guys,

im a australian hip-hop artists so please dont be too harsh lol, but heres a vid i wanted to get feedback on lyrics/flow/delivery/ and then clip. any would be appreciated thanks

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qYUA8b9IiKo

 

[Donta Black]

Top quality on the mix, dope beat and production, you have a semi-rudimentary flow but it will come in repetition, nice chorus, Keep going bruh I would work on giving your vocals more character, to display your confidence over the mic. Nice shit. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-could-you-hear-him-prod-@dblkmusic1-494512/

 

[Lightskinboy]

thanks for checking the vid/track bro, when u say semi-rudimentary flow, u mean a basic flow? in ur opinion what do u feel i could do to improve? ive heard more multi's can beef it up, and u say more character u mean emphasis? thanks again for the feedback always good to have advice, ill check ur beats asap!

 

[Lightskinboy]

yours sounds real laid back, spacey feeling more experimental then ive heard i dig what you've done not a beat i would personally use but i like how its not like everything else you hear these days, its more chilled like your floating with the clouds on a journey maybe?? good work man

 

[sansansan]

good beat man, the quality is really good and i like the melody. keep up the good work!

 

[Lightskinboy]

good beat man, the quality is really good and i like the melody. keep up the good work!

thanks man, im glad ur feeling it.