Paper Chaser (Produced by: Emblem) F4F

[emblem]

Sup all,

Looking to better my craft. If you have any pointer(s), please share.

Emblem
Link: https://soundcloud.com/emblem-beats/paper-chaser

 

[Nipharu]

Nice mix the beat is clean, you've got the industry sound for this one. Can't find any areas you may need to improve everything on this sounded fairly solid honestly.

Feedback?

 

[kdanger]

only crit on this is the snare roll sometimes it feels a bit thin. Aside from that this beat is on point! well mixed, may be a bit long but overall nice man! check me out!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...new-f4f-returned-always-conscious-rap-477087/

 

[audiodopebeats]

Nice use of the automation, it makes the beat sound less predictable instead of sounding like a 16 bar loop. Um, nothing really to critique about, but maybe I'd drop the 808 or kick out for a few bars, and make the beat shorter.

 

[emblem]

Thank you all ^^ I'll go back and make the snares a little thicker and cut out some bars to make the track shorter to see how it sounds like. I appreciate the feedbacks!

 

[JamzProductions]

dope track that automation takes it to the next level

check my track out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...unk-cali-got-more-bounce-talkbox-hook-477155/

 

[emblem]

Thanks JamzProductions! I appreciate the comment!

 

[GameOfDeath]

Feelin this one a little more than the other. Don't know how to describe it but its that sound that kinda shuffles back and forth at the beginning. Transitions and switches on point, pretty sick.