NFL Practice beat

[Ismus the alkemist]

Hi. I just need some feedback on this beat. song structure, the mix, whatever let me know what yall think about it.

 

[King-Vis]

Sounds interesting, don't know what to say about the song structure it's a pretty short track. But the mixing is fine, like that NFL thing you did in the beginning. I can see a beat like that on an album/mixtape intro, but not as a song.

 

[Polyphonic Mind]

Like King-Vis said, it's definitely an interesting track. Good composition of sounds. I would definitely bring in the bass drop after the first voice-over though @ 0:24.

Also, I agree with King-Vic in that this is more of a mixtape thing or maybe even a commercial or documentary score.

 

[Ismus the alkemist]

thanks for the feedback. This track IS actually for a mixtape

 

[rawrrawrrawr]

i like it, its a different concept but I think its unique for that. As with the others, would like to hear a longer version

 

[Ismus the alkemist]

sorry there is no longer version. Its for a mixtape for a documentary. Its meant to be a minute long

 

[DJA208]

Agree with what's been said, sounds good, but needs a longer version as i wanted to keep listening!

 

[americabeatz]

ur melody is cliche
and feels like theres no mixing

 

[IVMIMVM]

melody is very basic, percussion way too weak for a pump up beat, hi hat is annoying as hell

 

[Ismus the alkemist]

Thanks for the feedback. Side note: If i gave you feedback on your track and you are offended do not try to take it out on me its childish.

 

[quike]

The brass is serious very well defined and in your face! I could hear dmx on this

 

[lilmagicz]

this is a dope track good for a intro or short commercial keep doin ur thing