Man by the Sea (House track) F4fF4f

[Elytal]

https://soundcloud.com/djelytal/man-by-the-sea



Whats the verdict? F4F

 

[By-Tor]

Flows nicely, The only thing I would change are the snares (make it sound a bit more solid) but other than that it was an enjoyable listen.

 

[Elytal]

Thanks m8

 

[RouletteDare]

The volume and production is pretty good on this, but I felt that the initial build dropping out at 1:14 into yet another minute-long build was a bit deflating. Plus, when that second build finally drops into the lead, the riff is cool, but it could do with a harmony/flourishes/transitions.

I dig the automation build from 3:07, but, again, the constant looping of that one riff wears a little thin.

 

[dylan_wtf]

yeah the snare was the only thing that threw me off, doesnt blend in with the rest of the track...melodies are on point tho sounds like something that would be on the radio, you got the song structure down too a lot of cool changeups, mix could be better tho

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...beat-tape-dropping-valentines-day-f4f-466540/

 

[Elytal]

Thanks m8, im taking a piano class right now so im hoping that helps with the whole harmony and what not. Also agree with the progression, could be stronger and cleaner.

 

[Elytal]

yeaa snares are like my weakest point in dance music ha, or drums besides the kick for that matter.