I'm not much into these types of tracks, so I couldn't criticize that well either...
I felt like in hipster, some sounds sound kinda cheesy. Like I think they would sound a bit better if they were a bit deeper and had a bit more reverb and stereo effect maybe?
Just feeling like the ambience is cold and the sounds too upfront, if that even makes sense at all.
But the mixing seems on point and I feel that the biggest thing missing here is a rapper.
Keep it up!
Cheers!
~Kosius