new MAYFLY original track (F4F!)

Thanks for sharing! Enjoyable track. I like the sounds in the beginning. Definitely sets a nice vibe. My main feedback would be on your kick, it loses a lot of its presence during the busy parts of the track. Maybe try sidechaining the rest of the track more aggressively to the kick, and add a higher end kick sample during the chorus. I also think some vocal samples would fit nicely on the track. Keep up the great work! :)

Appreciate your feedback as well: https://soundcloud.com/showclothes/estelle-american-boy-show-clothes-remix
 
This is really dope man. It's like trap with an 8 bit feeling. Clean mix, tons of space even in the most intense parts of the beat. To give it a more powerful feeling though, I'd raise the 808 a bit. Stays interesting the whole way through with all the changes you add, definitely a great listen! I followed you on soundcloud man, look forward to hearing more.
 
Good track man. It will be a waste if you don't write lyrics for it.
The track is good in every aspect, but when you add a vocal rapping, be careful not to interfere the vocal with the synths :).
And wrong section. The song is clearly R&B/hip hop :).
I read what the other guys wrote, but ti my ears you should not change a thing, cos it sounds great this way and editing it may ruin this :).
We engineers have a saying that if something works, don't touch it. But add lyrics :).

Best regards,
Kostadin

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this beat is dope, bro. I do agree with a previous poster that the bass gets lost a bit. I would have used one with a bit more resonance and depth. But this is catchy, I could see someone flowing on it, but also get used in video games or a soundtrack for a short.

TiMiNo
 
Thanks for feedback. These synths man, I love them! The subbass is a little bit turned down. Overall great track keep it up! :)
 
almost sounds something i could hear on the radio.. drum work needs to better though... and you have something but it's good regardless....
 
- Great work on the mastering bro! But in the beginning I miss some more sounds in the backgroud, it sounds empty in my opinion. What panned percs would do the job or chords.
- The build up goes smoothly, I would personally add more elements to the buildup in order to give the build up a wider feel.
- After the drop, kicks and the sub sounds too low in my opinion but it leaves a great character!.
- Panning is done very well!
- I love the composition, you have tried to make the track complicated which is nice as well.

I have nothing bad to say! Keep it up and a great job! Could you also check out my work ? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...amo-boneless-anill-trap-remix-f4f-%AC-484304/

Thanks!
 
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