DJ With My First Beat Ever Made. Would Love Some Feedback...

[DJ Detruence]

I've DJ'd for years, had a little bit of a slow period. Got my hands into producing...this is what came out. ENJOY!




Looking for any type of feedback as I actually enjoyed the process and plan on sticking with it.

Thank you!

 

[Sal_Meth]

I must say this is not soo bad for a first beat, though it doesnt sound good to be honest, my first beat as like trash, it prolly was a Drum loop Lol , now about your beat, i just dont like the composition, Stick to the Game you'll get somewhere,
Leave feedback on mine
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/weeknd-type-beat-%2Adark-rnb%2A-xxx-f4f-beatzonmeth-453841/

 

[DJ Detruence]

Thanks Sal! I posted this beat on like 3 other forums and got nothing so far...

By composition...are you saying you dont like the layout of the song and I should of mixed it up more...or that you dont like the sounds together that made up the melody? Just trying to see where I need the most work.

 

[Sal_Meth]

I was Talking about the Melody, Maybe buy newer Vsts for better sounds too,and it would be useful takin Piano Classes, you really gots to invest in yourself in this biz

 

[CKRB]

Like the drums! The arranging could be better (intro, verse etc.) imo as like the melody doesn't sound appealing to me to be honest. You could try some more variation and like the above post says some new vst with fresh sounds. Keep it up!