Our new song "Noelle"

[fbogart]

Dear forums friends.
Our new song, "Noelle".
https://youtu.be/m9YUlCImpbg

I hope you like it ;-)
Cheers.

 

[Mahamane]

Good song

 

[fatay]

Good song bro

 

[fbogart]

Hey Fatay and Mahamane.
Thanks a lot!
Cheers.

 

[AURORA4DTH]

you guys make some nice little videos to go along with your tracks. Good job

 

[fbogart]

Thanks AURORA4DTH.!
Cheers.

you guys make some nice little videos to go along with your tracks. Good job

 

[Ajedi]

Damn good song and great voice, really clean vocals.

 

[fbogart]

Hi Ajedi:
Thanks!...great that you liked it.
Cheers.

Damn good song and great voice, really clean vocals.

 

[Raellic]

I like it, but it's really loud.

 

[J.t.browning9]

I was impressed actually and I'm not easily impressed. I like you're vocal melodies a lot, it's easy listening. F4F ?

. My mixing isn't good yet, I'm using lackluster equipment in a garage, but my songwriting skills you can hear. I put a couple links

https://soundcloud.com/citizentrain/superhero-demo

https://soundcloud.com/citizentrain/cogburn-demo

 

[J.t.browning9]

Ajedi, you're song is way too repetitive. There needs to be clear distinction between verse, chorus, bridge, etc. even without vocals. People should be able to say okay, this is probably where a verse is, or this is where a chorus probably goes, etc. you've definitely got skill with the guitar and drums, just work on song structure and you'll get there.

Nobody gets better without constructive criticism. Feel free to rip apart my songs too in the post above. All I ever hear is people saying it's good. I want someone to tell me it sucks and what's wrong with it.