The slow groove is really effective! Nice guitar solo too. The overall sound is good. I think you nailed it. Great job.
Here is my first rock post, i tried to play around with polyrhythms:
BaffleGast by TheFrogKing | The Frog King | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Sounds familiar It's a perfect day by that craggy guy off TRAINSPOTTER's.
It's a good song, but I think it takes a little too long to get going. I do love the laid-back, raw feeling I get from this song though.
Great work, but I also do think that the intro is too long. I think the song should start at 1:23 ..