I don't really understand the way the strings are supposed to go with the beat. It feels like a sort of random conjunction of styles. Also the production is very sparse. I think if you added more instrumental parts it could be a bit more interesting. I like the choral vocals that come in after the first verse. The way they relate to the sparkly sounds is cool. The part with just the hi hat and the vocals doesn't make much sense to me, although the vocal melody itself is pretty cool.
