there is too much going on, and the sounds are really choose wisely. The kick is way to harsh, for my preference. keep going you tho, you're going to succeed
I agree with the first comment. There are a lot of strong elements. I like the main melody and also the second vocal type melody, but they don't get that well together with all the other sounds.
Yeah, the sample is super dope. Really cool soulful sound that Kanye would def love. The problem is the kick sounds off beat and pretty weird overall. I feel like the drums don't really carry the groove like you want them to. Keep working and try to get those drums to groove a little smoother.
Like metioned above man I agree with them but I can see where you were going with this.
The sample is ill, I think if you cut back with the drums and try and keep them as minimal itll work very nicely,
keep up the good work!
like the first guy said. You need to work on your arrangement. there's too much going on. It's like you've lost control and spazzed out. It's too repetitive. need to add some variation.
Not too bad, this track could be better. There is a lot going on making it hard to catch a rhythm and feel for this one. Keep working tho and your sound will fall into place!