Your beat is very textbook. You've followed all the general tricks (going up and down an octave in the melody, descending hi-hat runs) but I think you should consider incorporating new elements that distinguish you from the rest.
The 808s coming in a couple bars before the kick was nice! The kick really THUMPS, and the hi-hat runs sound really crisp, great job on those too.
Maybe consider incorporating negative space for contrast? A pause before the kick comes in would make it more impactful!
Of course, this is all just my personal opinion.
Overall I really like your flow! Solid beat fam!