Wests One { You Bring ) F4f

[West One]

Hi, made this soNg a while ago.
i can see a few problems with it already since i have grown a lot since then. Highs are bit too loud in the hook, vocals could be a clearer, etc.
Just wondering what you guys think, thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/west-one-1/you-bring

 

[arvindsg]

haha i recognize that radio sample in the beginning! this is cool man, flows are solid but the vocals seem louder on the right ear compared to left, might just be my monitors. I think you need to develop on your voice more because it sounds kind of forced for lack of a better word, but I listened to one of your most recent songs and you're definitely improving.

if you could return feedback on my most recent beat, that would be great
https://soundcloud.com/arvindsg/nuance
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ty-south-etc/harp-based-beat-f4f-100%-489666/

 

[hcgaron]

Nice work man, I dig the sample at the top of the track! Really nostalgic sounding. I think you kind of hit it when you were mentioning the things you heard about this track now. I think in general the hi-mid frequencies are a bit too forward and in your face, which will keep people from being able to play it real loud. The vocal fx were cool, but I agree that the vox seemed louder at times in the right speaker (especially in the 2nd verse). Overall really dope!

Really great work, keep it up! I can't wait to hear more!


Please return the feed when you can: https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../bad-medicine-[f4f-100%]-489698/#post49854406


Cheers!

 

[alienaircraftmusic]

this dope..u already know what needs to be fixed..can really judge ur rapping bcuz i cant really hear/understand..i liked ur intro that was pretty dope..from what i could hear rapping is ok..somethings could be tighten up timing wise..but i have an overly extreme attention to detail..nice work

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/new-mix-feelin-lonely-ghost-f4f-489545/

 

[officialdh]

the beat is sick! i really like the drums; they're simple but they work really well. You basically pointed out everything that needs to improve already. Def. work on those vocals though, they don't sound too great. I'd appreciate if you also check out my track: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-etc/disco-type-beat-rap-488061/#post49846687

 

[trakstarjr]

You already know about the mixing critiques, so all I can talk about is the song. Not the type of song that I'd listen to, but that doesn't matter, I can still appreciate good production. This track was well done... I just don't really like how the vocals are mixed during the verse.. but you already know that. Keep it up and check me out!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...l-beats-popular-acapellas-feed-4-feed-489718/

 

[West One]

Thanks for all the feed guys. hit you on your soundclouds with some follows and comments. Nice work on all of your tracks!.