This is different but it's lit !
My only gripe is, I'm a lyricist and after the first two bars, I was ready to start spittin but, the constant beat repeat didnt give me a place to land. Other than that tho??? Flames....
As a starting point, I would use the 8-34sec time for verse(s) and then use the 34-50sec time as your Chorus spot. The intro is already tight. And also, I would either create a bridge or only use the automated fx that are currently panning in the beat for that purpose.
bass is dope bro!!!! snares are kinda all over the place but its just my opinion, other ppl might like it ! overall, dope peep my channel for different lofi beats - youtube.com/igorreva
hard asf